i would like to get feedback about my writing and not just "it was great" or " it was horrible"

what i want

i would like to get feedback about my writing and not just "it was great" or " it was horrible"

i want to love,
i want to feel,
but i cant feel
my love to you.

i want to smile,
i want to heal,
but i cant heal,
when i'm near you.

i hate to lie,
i hate to steal,
but its all worth,
being with you.


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