sound of madness הצצה
"i'v all ways thought that i could make it alive, i'v all ways thought we could be together no metter what i'v believed in you and in the fact that we will live toghether forever."
the story begins in the dark side of world, where thiefs burglars and black magicans lives toghether, exiled. i have born to a thief father and a weird mother, she was not like all the other weman she was strange, she was….alse.
and i…. what i was? i was strange little boy who has no one and i didnt know how does the light of the bright side looks like i didnt know what being good means i didnt know how to love… i had no one. as i got older i was runing away from home looking for ways to escape. i was climbing mountains looking how to run away from this hell from this jail.
i was look normal white skin as i didnt got the sun my body was needed, just as every one alse here, brown thorny hair, green dark eyes and my favirote color? what was it? it was white as the bright side of the world was, once as i got seventeen i saw it, i saw the path to run away i left a note saying goodbye, i took bread with me and some money as the thorny gaits start to open as a truck of food coming i run away. seesing the sun at my first time of life, i herd stories about it but never could imagine how
beautiful it was.
"im out" i whispered and start to run as fast as my legs could carry me runing away from man who try to bring me back to hell.
תגובות (3)
זה ממש יפה באנגלית (תכלס, הכל הרבה יותר יפה באנגלית) אבל אני חושבת שעדיף בעברית (בלי להעליב), לא כי יותר קל לקרוא, אלא פשוט כי אני חושבת שלך יהיה יותר קל (גם חסר הפיסוק בין המשפטים..)
בכל מקרה אשמח להמשך :)
תודה רבה אני אנסה פרק ראשון באנגלית ואשתמש באייפד פשוט במחשב הכל מתבלגן מודה על התגובה :)
עדיף שתעשי בעברית, למרות שבאנגלית זה יותר יפה כי אני חושבת שהרבה מקוראי האתר לא יודעים אנגלית וזה יהיה חבל, כי את תפספסי קוראים והם יפספסו סיפור יפה :-)