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MY MUM

נועה 05/09/2011 969 צפיות 4 תגובות
מקווה ש-♥
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נועה♥

.When my mom pass away, I felt empty, as if someone took my heart.
I didn't understand, why someone that I loved, someone that was my family have to
?die
I felt like a mushroom that grows so fast, but in the moment that someone came and
.destroyer her she just died, and she can't grows again.
.My mum was the most beautiful, wise and honest woman, that i ever seen.
She always said that no matter where she is i can always find the rhythm, her music
.rhythm.
I remember that in my birthday, my mum bought me a beautiful dress. it's was funny ’cause she brought the dress with the hanger
.But i was happy, happy that i had my own mum.
.I was happy to know that my mum will be there for me, always.
I knew that some people doesn't know what is mom and so i was thanking to god that
.i have my own mum.

.But when, when he took her from me i didn't knew the word mum anymore.
.I felt like those people, empty. as if someone took my heart.
.I felt as if i'm loosing my breathing.
.When my mum pass away everything changed for me.
.My life became to a empty life.
And even my friends were with me, I felt alone
My mum and i were the best staff for the life
.but she is gone and i'm alone in that staff, i feel alone in this life, without my mum.
.I know that now, my mum became to an angel, a beautiful angel.
.I always said that she is an angel, my angel.
.Angel that will be always there to give me a hug.
.my mum is angel, i know that and i wish she could give me a hug, a big hug.
.if I could change the life, I would bringing my mum, to me.
.I would get her down from the sky. and let her a hug, a big hug.
.But i know that i can't change, anything from this life.
.And i feel empty, as if someone took my heart.
…I feel a big sadness, here in my heart. sadness that doesn't goes.


תגובות (4)

wow! so sad :(

05/09/2011 22:47

יש לך מספר טעויות דקדוק שעלייך לתקן (אם את רוצה אני יכולה לעזור) אבל חוץ מזה: מ-ד-ה-י-ם!!!!!!!!!!

05/09/2011 22:53

נועה , כל כך מרגש וכתוב נפלא!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ממש ריגשת אותי
תודה בקי

06/09/2011 15:46

מיטל, תודה! ♥
galileostu ,תודה גם לך! :)
ו- venoturus תודה לך! (: ו… תודה שאמרת לי שיש לי טעויות בדקדוק, וכמובן שאשמח לעזרתך, תמיד שמחה לקבל עזרה. אחרי הכול- לומדים מטעויות. אז… בבקשה!

06/09/2011 21:25
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