Rings of smoke

Estonian 05/06/2013 621 צפיות 3 תגובות

And so you told me,
and so you left me,
and now the clouds you have left…
It's still burning,
on my shoulder,
and it gets into me, deep within.

You left me a souvenir,
you injected me with your fears.

Rings of smoke,
in a broken ceiling.
Rings of smoke,
you left it behind you.
Rings of smoke,
still all around me,
and no it chocks,
it chocks me.

And so you told me,
you didn't want it at all,
but no it's too late,
look at what you left behind.
And all the days,
it seems like you stay,
because the burn is so alive.

You left me a souvenir,
you injected me with your fears.

Rings of smoke,
in a broken ceiling.
Rings of smoke,
you left it behind you.
Rings of smoke,
still all around me,
and no it chocks,
it chocks me.

Rings of smoke,
in a broken ceiling.
Rings of smoke,
you left it behind you.
Rings of smoke,
still all around me,
and no it chocks,
it chocks me.
Your rings of smoke.


תגובות (3)

אין לי מילים, אתה פשוט מוכשר!
אני אוהבת את 'הדימויים' שהכנסת בין המילים כמו…
Rings of smoke,
in a broken ceiling.

It's still burning,
on my shoulder,
and it gets into me, deep within.

אני לא יודעת אם זה נקרא בדיוק דימויים…
אבל אני מקווה שהבנת אותי…

06/06/2013 00:06

תודה רבה!

06/06/2013 06:08

נמנמנמנמנמנמ *~*
תגיד לי מה להגיב ואני יגיב *-^
אני צריכה לחדש את מאגר המילים שלי ;)
שיר מהמם

06/06/2013 09:33
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