eva
eva sleeps like the dead while she's still alive
so young yet so decrepit inside
the old god man had crippled her when she was just a child
while she stared at him, awed
but he is no longer her lord
cause she stopped looking for ways to be cured
she had conffesd me,one night
that she stopped brushing her teeth
whispering in her stink breath as i lay there beneath
who need a mouth to serve as a window when your soul do not exist
and i look at her ,hypnotise,thinking about all the times we kissed
says she likes it when the taste is sour
well thats one thing i can give her ,can't offer much more
i close my eyes while my body is tangeld with hers
close her eyes while her body is pressed against mine
,she ask me to admit that she's dead
well i think your are very much alive,my beast
,but she knows she's right
it is true cause her dreams never come
only i,come like a drum,while she's biting my tongue
eva sleeps like the dead while she's still alive
it's because she never dream at night
,wake up in the morning as if she had just closed her eyes
dark,purple and green adorn the skin beneth her red eyes
, teeth have gone yelow,and her piss has gone red
think i caught something from you,from the last time you had visit my bed
is she really dead,is she really dead?
תגובות (2)
לי זה בכלל לא הרגיש מאולץ, וכמו כל הקטעים שלך: זה רודף כזה, עם אצבעות ארוכות שחופרות מבפנים (באמת שאין לי דרך אחרת לתאר את זה)
היו גם כמה משפטים שמצאו חן בעיני במיוחד (בין אם זה בגלל הצליל, החריזה, או הרעיון)
נ. ב. – תזרום עם דם סקס ואלימות, מה אכפת לך? זה בא בתקופות. אולי בעוד שנה יעניין אותך רצח פרפרים?
לדעתי- הנושא ממש לא משנה, משנה מה אתה עושה איתו
תודה,התגובות שלך תמיד מעודדות אותי