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סיפור אהבה קצר באנגלית... אני יודעת שרובכם עצלנים ולא תקראו כי זה באנגלית אבל לא אכפת לי .
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Hollow -1

ĐɘȿpərɑɳdƱʍ 11/12/2013 940 צפיות 2 תגובות
סיפור אהבה קצר באנגלית... אני יודעת שרובכם עצלנים ולא תקראו כי זה באנגלית אבל לא אכפת לי .
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"Ah, ha…ah ha." I was running as fast as I could.
"You're not gonna get away!" The hooded man was on my tail, even though my tries to shake him.
"N-noo! Ah haa, I won't let you!" I shouted. I kept running for a long time, I didn't even care if he was behind me or not.
"Aha…I-I … I can't, I can't run any longer." I said with no power left.
I stopped running and sat on the ground.
"Who are they, those people?" I asked the darkness that was surrounding me, knowing I won't get any answer.
I looked around me, I didn't knew where was I.
There were many trees next to me, but since I couldn't see a lot because of the darkness I wasn't sure how many.
"A-hoo." I shouted but got no sound in return.
"Jeez… hard audience." I giggled and got up.
"So…enjoyed freedom?" The sound that came from behind me startled me and I fell.
"Y-you! How did you?!" I looked at the hooded man that was chasing me a while ago.
"Surprised, are we? I told you – I won't let you get away." I stared at him speechless.
"Don't worry I won't kill you or something, we need you alive."
"I know that! That's not the first time you know!" I shouted to him, not scared at all.
"Well, someone is angry…" He had an amused smile on his face, which made me more angry.
"I think you wouldn't be fine as well if you were kidnapped from you're house everyday!" I yelled to him.
"At least you're alive and safe, Hollow." I made a small growl in react to what he said.
"Don't call me in that name, me and her are completely different people!" Hollow's face appeared in my mind.
"But you're sharing the same body, you ARE one!"
"We're not!" I screamed and a tree near by cracked.
"Oh, anyway lets go already!" The man grabbed my arm and dragged me down the hill we were on.
"Stop! I don't want to go with you!" I yelled desperately.
" sorry… You're coming with me, either you like it or not." I struggled to get get my arm beck.
"Leave me ALONE!" I screamed as hard as I could, but the man ignored me.

המשך יבוא^^


תגובות (2)

אני אולי עצלנית, אבל בכל זאת קראתי עד הסוף!
לדעתי זה ממש יפה :)
"leave me alon"-יש למייקל שיר כזההה! הייתי חייבת ^^
הלוואי שאני הייתי יודעת לכתוב באנגלית, ):

12/12/2013 01:10

זה ממש נחמד.
יש לי טיפה הצעות לשיפורים (^~^) – קצת יותר תיאורים על המקום, הזמן, האווירה
– יש גירשיים (") במקומות שלא צריך אותם
– תקפצי שורה אחרי שהמדבר מתחלף (
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