The boarding school – Chapter 41 – Halloween – English special הפנימייה – פרק 41 – הלוואין – ספיישל אנגלית
This morning I woke up. Brazil and USA weren't at the room and I was so pleased when I understood that I woke up naturally this morning.
I got out of my bad and opened the door. Then I saw a creepy picture in front of my eyes. I saw monsters. Yes. Monsters.
I saw Frankenstein and a vampire and some zombies and even a Japanese butterfly.
– "What?!" I asked
"What what?" asked Frankenstein
"You can talk?"
"Of course. Don't your recognize my voice?"
"Wait a sec…"
I said. This voice was familier.
"You are Russia" I said.
"Yes"
"Why are you a Frankenstein?" I asked
"It's Haloween" He said "Don't you know what Haloween is?".
"Well, I don't know"
"So, Haloween is when you are wearing a costume and asking for candies. Where have you been in last Halloweens?".
"Well…" I said.
At the 31th to October last year Brazil made me faint of a ball… two years ago USA fed me in Mac-Don't-Bother-Us-In-Halloween.
"Halloween?" I answered "It explanes a lot".
"Hurry up, wear some costumes, ask for candies" Russia told me.
"I'll do that" I said.
He brought me an empty pumpkin and I was looking for Macs that USA left behind. I only find a Mac-Look-like-Justin-Biber. I ate it and I felt strange.
I went out, startet to pass through the doors and I knocked on them.
Sweden brought me some toffies and I brought her an autugraph.
Lithuania were a sluty cat costume. She brought me some chips-bags.
Belarus brought me a fake potato cause she loved the real ones too much.
Estonia brought me math homework and Hungary brought me some Gulash and healthy snacks. I gave them all to Estonia and he was as happy as a cat in a blender.
Armenia brought me a weird bread that she called "Lavashi". I decided to throw it cause I don't eat anything with the letter V in the middle.
All the boys were screaming everytime I was close to them and all the girls cried.
After the candy collection I ate them as fast as I can so no one could take it away from me.
After the meal I went down to the costiume competition.
I won the first place for the scariest costume and I puked all the little candies. Netherlands hurried up and collected them all.
Georgia didn't wear any costume but she won the seccond place.
After that we went to a tea party at UK's room.
Azerbaijan and Armenia were beating each over.
Belarus chased after Russia with a knife while Norway were flirtting with Australia.
Germany and Austria were busy eating strudels that their mother made.
I was pretty tired and I fell asleep in UK's room.
When I woke up I wasn't wearing any clothe on me and I was all blue from toothpaste.
"Damn!" I shouted.
תגובות (7)
like !!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!likeeee I love this story… so funny and so interesting
good work! keep writing
(גם אם יש פה ושם שגיאות, זה לא שולל כלום XD)
like!! but purim is the bassttt!! XD
הייתי שמח אם תגידו לי גם איפה השגיאות.
First of all – America should keep his name the way it is, you changed it to USA, although it's about the same thing.
Here are some of the mistakes I discovered:
Opedned -> Opened.
Creepy -> A creepy.
When you've been -> When have you been.
31st -> 31th.
Befor -> Before.
Made me to faint from a ball -> Made me faint of a ball.
Before two years USA fed me -> Two years ago USA (America) fed me.
It's explains -> It explains.
Mac's -> Macs ( in this specific situation ).
I find only -> I only found.
Went out and start passing throw the doors and I knocked on them -> I went out, started to pass through the doors and I knocked on them.
Lithuania was dressed up -> Lithuania were.
Math homwrok – Math homewrok.
So no one could took it away from me -> So no one could take it away from me.
After the eating -> After the meal.
I went down to the costime competition -> I went down to the costume competition.
I won in the first place -> I won the first place.
Hurry up -> Hurried up.
Georgia didn't wore -> Georgia didn't wear.
She won at the second place -> She won the second place.
Norway was flirt -> Norway were flirting.
Were busy in -> Were busy.
That their mother made them -> That their mother made.
I fall asleep -> I fell asleep.
I were without any close on me -> I wasn't wearing any cloth.
Damn! I shuted -> Damn! I shouted.
But after all – the story was incredible.
תודה רבה סהר רק שלך הייתה טעות אחת – Flirting זה Flirtting. יש בזה הברה אחת ולכן צריך להכפיל את ה – t. ממש תודה רבה! (אמרתי לך שאתה הרבה יותר טוב ממני באנגלית).
כן, לא שמתי לב. :)
אין בעד מה, אני מקווה שלא תמצא עוד פאשלות כמו זו ( אני לא חושב שיש עוד ).