child of darkness:book one, chapter one, prolouge
.why hello there kind reader! it's quite splendid you stopped by
oh my! where are my manners? allow me to introduce my self. my name is Jadelyn
Tallman
.a strange name isn't it? we'll get to that later
I'm approximately 17 years of age and learning at the Thornwood highschool of Thornwood town. A depressing name for a depressing town… anyway I currently live at the edge of Thornwood, or should I say in the forest that surrounds this dull town. This is another thing I'll explain later.
My appearence is not important right, but I shall tell you this: I am tall. quite tall. Ok extremelly tall, 1.98 to be excact,that is another point that will be explained.
Oh my, I've wasted time blabering about my self that I forgot whu are you even here.The thing that set the events happening was not who I am or where I am, It's about what I am.
As you can see in the title,this is not a regular story.Remember the odd things I was talking about?
The thing that differs me from others, from mortals, is my own father
The one who was known
as the Slenderman
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>טם טם טם<
רעיון יפה.
מקורי שלך?
I'm so glad that finally I can see stories in English. This is quite rare, so whenever I see them, I instantly read it.
Well, there was one thing that bothered me, and it was those lines:
we'll get to that later, that is another point that will be explained, This is another thing I'll explain later…
You promise to explain lots of things, yet, I didn't really understand why. I mean, of course, this is only the prologue, yet, it feels weird to think of explaining the height of the charachter…
Well, maybe it's just me. I don't know.
And by the way, I don't really know who the slenderman is. Will that be a problem for understanding the story? Should I read the whole information about him you added? I would read that if I weren't so lazy :/
Well, anyhow, I'll be glad to read more.
Have a great weekend!
ווואו את כותבת נהדרר !!! תמשיכי בבקשהה
@estonian:
yes, it is important that you'll read about the slenderman in order to understand the story.
all of the things that she said that she'd explain are related to the slenderman, he's also a big part in the story
@stardustsherlotte
כן, זה בהחלט רעיון מקורי שלי. הוא היה בראש שלי לכמה זמן וחשבתי לעשות ממנו סיפור ^_^